Chronicles by ExtrusionUK

Author's Description:
A long, rambling tale describing the adventures of a idealistic young man and his encounters with the corporate world - or how his bank balance improved and his social life got a lot more complex. (Chapters vary in length and sexual content)
Size: 579 KB ( ~ 109,796 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2011-11-22

At last, a story that is the product of the author's big head, rather than his little one. Having said that, the way the story is written (with frequent changes of the point of view) the reader has to pay attention, or drop by the wayside.

This is not a stroke story by any means, but it does include passages that are truly erotic. Essentially though it's a romance, and as with all good romances, love wins out in the end.

The editing could have been a little tighter, but generally, it's not bad enough to detract from the reader's enjoyment.

A good read, to be enjoyed!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10