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Alien - The Beginning by MisguidedChild

Author's Description:
This is about a high school teacher that has a close encounter with an alien. The results of that encounter allow him some mind reading skills and some mind manipulation. Things get complicated by the government watching him. They get more complicated when the alien 'infects' females when he makes love to them. This could get complicated, and fun.
Size: 551 KB ( ~ 104,486 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, Mind Control, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Extra Sensory Perception, Incest, Mother, Daughter, Group Sex, Teacher/Student

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2011-03-25

The great thing about a Fantasy Story is that any form of speculation takes it out of the impossible into the possible. So here we are witnessing the crash in the desert of an Alien spacecraft and the brush with death that Jim faces only to be saved by an Alien Mind which forms a symbiotic relationship to stay alive. A symbiote as old as the Universe itself.

Now bear in mind that a parasite is an unhealthy being, whereas a symbiote benefits both itself and its host. Of course Jim is forced into contact with Homeland Military, and the psychotic General.

JJ the beautiful sexy Army Doctor is forced into checking out our Hero, and they readily fall in love, as do her young daughters. The family is forced to run from the General and his Guard until fially defeating them.All this through mind control, and some highly charged incestuos love!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10