There is, sometimes, an Author who has that unique ability to write excellent prose. So, story line aside, meet Crunchy. Crunchy has the rare ability to write like a modern day Dickens, or a budding ..... place the name of your favorite Author here....and at the same time write about Magic, Beauty, Love, and desires in a way that I enjoy, and you will too!
Franklin is an untried Wizard who realises that he must be very careful in the way he changes everyday occurences to his personal benefit, so that others are not damaged by his Magic. He lives a happy life in a job that allows him freedom of expression, and an income in excess of the norm, as a cab driver. Can you imagine driving all day with the traffic lights all green, spaces open up so no jams happen, get my meaning?
Along comes Sam(antha) and there goes his heart to the most beautiful brilliant woman he has ever met. Their attraction is mutual, and we are fortunate to live their budding romance vicariously.
I do not usually review unfinished stories, but this has such good potential, I am making an exception; so there!