September's Children by Lubrican


Description: Everybody knows he's making a list, and checking it twice, cause he's gonna find out who's naughty and nice. But what if SANTA was naughty? Who could keep a list on him? A story about gifts you might not want to read at Christmas time. Written as the logical "next step" and companion piece, of sorts, to "'Twas The Night Before Yuletide," posted a year past, just before Christmas.
Size: 86 KB ( ~ 16,308 words)
Type: Humor
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Magic

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2009-12-22


Christmas is the time of giving, and in this delightful tale of wishes come true, these presents give of themselves for years and years.

But you must really want what SANTA will bring you... Married or single, young or old, it is as though you are in the middle of a dream, but you fortunate women are blessed with a wish come true, but you also get a wonderful surprise come next September.

And all in time for next christmas, thanks to Bob's devious mind!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by pairadice   [other reviews by pairadice]

Reviewed: 2009-12-22


An adult Christmas story by one of SOL's best authors will keep you wondering long after you read the story.
The author does an excellent job of characterization on the protagonist who is not one of his standard characters. You would swear that this was a real psychiatrist writing the story, the characterization is that tight.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10