Hard to Handle by ElSol


Description: (Impervious III) Tavi Smith goes to college. How does a young superhero stay out of trouble with all that freedom?
Size: 153 KB ( ~ 29,013 words)
Type: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Superhero

Review by manddscott   [other reviews by manddscott]

Reviewed: 2016-07-28


This review is for the entire "Impervious" series, rather than just this story.

A boy with exceptional power grows up. He was adopted when young, so we know nothing of his true parentage, but he appears to have tremendous strength, and is impervious to any weapon used on him. In addition, skin-to-skin contact allows him to see the misdeeds of others, an ability which can bring about much pain.

For plot, I give the series a B (7). It has a lot of promise, and is above average, but jumps at different paces throughout the trilogy. It also leaves much unexplained which a curious reader would want to know.

For technical quality, it gets an A+ (9). There were few errors spotted throughout the story.

For personal appeal, a B+ (more than 7, but not quite 8). Each portion of the trilogy is relatively short, with less than 10 chapters. Combined, they make a pleasantly lengthy read. The issue I have is that the characters lack development. They appear to be relatively one-dimensional, yet they could be much more.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7