The Honeymoon by CWatson

Author's Description:
Amanda Daniels has married Patrick Greer. Otherwise, nothing else is going right.
Size: 252 KB ( ~ 47,787 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Exhibitionism, Slow

Review by pawwriter   [other reviews by pawwriter]

Reviewed: 2012-12-30

At this time, this story is over 3 years old. I came upon it by a random search.I wondered why it was not reviewed since it is nothing like the description.

This is the story of 2 close friends, Amanda and Terri, who got married together and were on their honeymoon together. Both were very much in love with their spouses, but each couple had different experiences with sex. Terri and her husband had lived and loved together for over a year. Amanda had waited for the wedding to have sex.

The story is told from the viewpoint of the couple who waited. It seems that her inexperience made their wedding night a disaster. It is only after some talks with Terri that she is able to break through her problems and discover that sex with a loving partner can be great.

What was the surprise in the story was that Terri then sees that the sex she had with her husband was not as good as she thought it could be and asks Amanda for lessons on how to make it better. By the end of the story both couples were having great loving sex.

This story does not involve swapping. Both couples would not even consider it as they were very much in love with their spouses. That is not to say that the sex was not good.

The editing in this story was excellent. Kudos to whoever did the editing.

This is a great story about couples finding more about themselves and their spouses. I was not sure from the description that it was as good as it was. A good read for anyone who likes a good story about love.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10