Not Guilty by Harddaysknight


Description: Wife's lover is shot to death and there appears to be more than circumstantial evidence pointing toward the husband.
Size: 16 KB ( ~ 3,034 words)
Type: Humor
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Humor, Cheating

Review by anim8ed   [other reviews by anim8ed]

Reviewed: 2014-05-22 - (Review Updated: 2015-10-01)


This story makes me glad I am NOT a jelly doughnut. Dark humor and stereotypes abound in this quick little tale of cheating and revenge. It is one of the best of this genre I have read and left me with a smile on my face.

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Review by smokeaknz   [other reviews by smokeaknz]

Reviewed: 2009-07-16


I don't normally even read stories this short, but something about the description caught my eye.

I don't particularly like cuckold stories at all, and a particularly not first-person stories.

The opening grabbed my attention, and the story never let go.

I'm not going to spoil anyone's entertainment by giving away any more, but I will say "READ THIS STORY"!

Construction is absolutely elegant, and plot is superb (and complete, which is a surprise given the story length). It's a little gem of a story, and it will make your day.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10