Reviewed: 2014-05-22 - (Review Updated: 2015-10-01)
This story makes me glad I am NOT a jelly doughnut. Dark humor and stereotypes abound in this quick little tale of cheating and revenge. It is one of the best of this genre I have read and left me with a smile on my face.
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I don't normally even read stories this short, but something about the description caught my eye.
I don't particularly like cuckold stories at all, and a particularly not first-person stories.
The opening grabbed my attention, and the story never let go.
I'm not going to spoil anyone's entertainment by giving away any more, but I will say "READ THIS STORY"!
Construction is absolutely elegant, and plot is superb (and complete, which is a surprise given the story length). It's a little gem of a story, and it will make your day.