The Donaldsons by Lazlo Zalezac

Author's Description:
Melinda is a highly driven executive of a major aerospace company. Life was perfect until she tangled with the Donaldson family - a group of the most arrogant and difficult people she had ever met. After that, life gets a little strange.
Size: 208 KB ( ~ 39,443 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Slow

Review by olddave1951   [other reviews by olddave1951]

Reviewed: 2017-02-08

It's an oldie but a goodie. Every where you turn there is another one of the Donaldson clan. Where ever they pop up, you can bet they are at the top of the pile. I laughed through all eleven chapters. Great give and take dialogue.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2009-07-13

What can I say, Lazlo has done it again!

When an irresistable force meets an immovable obstacle more than sparks fly! Meet the wackiest, craziest, illogical, brilliant minded people on the face of this Earth, or one very much like it, and you have the funniest laugh a line (well nearly) you can imagine! Can you imagine a Warrior overcome by his fiancée's perfume, Hoppes #9?

And she falls for him because he understands her physics dissertation! I will not go into this happy one further because to tell it like it is would spoil the fun!

This is not a stroke story; so alas some readers will fall by the wayside, tough luck guys you're the ones who miss out, not us!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10