Within Your Crowd by Jake Rivers


Description: Billy Ray finds the girl of his dreams, but get beat up by her dad's goons and thrown off the place. Is there room for him in Madison's crowd?
Size: 62 KB ( ~ 11,757 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic

Review by BikeWriter   [other reviews by BikeWriter]

Reviewed: 2011-06-08


This is another great romantic story from Jake Rivers. Our hero, Billy Ray Lamar is a rodeo cowboy and rancher who delivers some horses purchased by Madison Townsend.

The two take to each other like a bear takes to honey, but her father has already arranged her marriage to another millionaire. He has four of his men "discourage" Billy from making any more moves on Maddie.

Billy comes back to their estate to set things straight with both millionaires, then goes back to the rodeo life. Maddie, however, is not finished with Billy Ray!

Read this story, please. It has everything going for it except much sex.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10