Candice Kane had her trials: her name, her ex, and his new skank of a wife. That, she could handle. Then a dead body forced her to confront the family curse she'd hidden from everyone; the visions that plagued her if she touched something associated with strong emotion. The police didn't believe it was murder. Only she knew the truth. Then the town's bad boy showed up, adding attraction to the danger she was facing. Could she find a killer and hide her secret?
Size: 315 KB ( ~ 59,733 words)
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Extra Sensory Perception, Mystery
Simply outstanding. This story has more twists and turns than Palomar Mountain Road.
Candy Kane (not a stripper) has a unique gift. It could get her in trouble or make life interesting or both. Then you have "the boy her mother warned her about" back in town. Add a bit of murder, cheating wives, and sunken treasure and you have a pretty good story going for you.
I put this as a must read from the Wine Maker.
Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9