Indian Steel by Crunchy

Description: Continuing the adventures of a fisherman named John, in a world not his own. Read Desert Dream first, or don't vote on the plot. This is a sequel!
Size: 112 KB ( ~ 21,239 words)
Type: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Time Travel, Slow

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2010-03-21

Well, what can I say. The first thing I did after reading this tale of derring-do was to buckle my swash, jump onto my trusty steed, Hyundai, and thank the heavens that I never went long-lining off the coast of Alaska! Y'see that is where John got thrown overboard when his Captain's Fishing Boat capsized and he landed up in the middle of the desert somewhere in time, where he meets the love of his life, and goes 'walkabout' with sundry others including a sexy broad who becomes wife #2!

Crunchy has a way with words that makes me want to read all that he has written, but with fifteen odd thousand entries I have to be selective, somewhat... Oh very well, I just like a well written story without all the typos one sometimes gets.

Now this is not a stroke story, but what it missaes there it makes up with Swords, and Sorcery.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10