This is a superhero story with a difference. Josh Logan was a jerk and a loser in high school until he found Aladdin's lamp. He worked his way up to being a superhero and a winner. Join him in his effort to save the world. Everybody needs all of the help he can get. Could you do what Josh does? I think so!
Size: 190 KB (36,792 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Humor, Superhero, First, Violent
Review by manddscott [other reviews by manddscott]
Reviewed:
This is a slightly different take on a genie story. Instead of the MC wishing for riches and sex slaves, as most genie stories seem to have, this MC wants to be a better person, and takes on the mantra "With great power comes great responsibility". As such, he becomes a superhero, starting by fighting local crime and escalating to fight international terrorism and other things.
The plot gets an average score of C (6). The story is simply not long enough to develop a plot for this type of story. For technical score, it gets a B (7). There are simply too many small mistakes, particularly with homophones, to give it a better overall score. For appeal, I also give it a B (7). It is better than average, but the author simply does not take the time to fully develop either the characters or the story.
