If anyone isn't familiar with the list (http://www.eviloverlord.com/lists/overlord.html) before reading this particular story... it should still be entertaining, but some of the enjoyment comes from anticipating and/or mentally checking off ideas on the list.
The story was great, the quality of the editing... not so much. It could have used another iteration of the reviewing process before posting.
Anyone looking for pure stroke, looking for flawless writing, or without a sense of humor will find this story disappointing. For anyone else, I'd recommend giving this story a read.