Fund Raising Redone by Roxanne by Jaqi


Description: Roxanne contacted me, and ask if she could improve on my ideas, I am posting her Emails to me. She worked very hard on it, and I think she has not had her time or health to finish it.
Size: 229 KB ( ~ 43,425 words)
Type: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Fa/Fa, Fiction, Humiliation, Orgy, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, School, Nudism

Review by barron of ideas   [other reviews by barron of ideas]

Reviewed: 2016-04-05


This review is not necessarily a recommendation. It is the only story I have read on SOL that involves sororities wrestling to raise money. There is some sex and a lot of wrestling type violence, and I guess BDSM since clamps and weights are applied to sensitive parts of girls anatomy.

It starts strangely, with a death and appeal for organ donation, and then chapter two starts the sorority story. Its marked incomplete, but it looks like the whole story is there to me.

The plot is a strong B, a seven. It is fairly straight forward without a lot of twists and turns. The technical score is an A, an eight. I am not sure whether others will agree with me that the Appeal is as high as a seven, but that's what I voted, a B. Its got a lot of nudity and painful wrestling activity. If that doesn't appeal to you, with two sororities competing at a fraternity over three weekends, then you might want to skip this one. If, like me, you want to know what happens next, you probably will like this one, at least enough to read the whole thing.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7