Commune by Lazlo Zalezac


Description: The real estate market is dead, the job market has dried up, the stock market has crashed, and cost of living has shot up. Half the world is faced with becoming homeless. Young and old alike are being pounded by events outside their control. Jack and Abby find what might be a solution - a commune. The result is even more than that - it is a community. WARNING: Some might find this story depressing.
Size: 783 KB ( ~ 148,480 words)
Type: Drama
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by 54vette   [other reviews by 54vette]

Reviewed: 2009-02-16 - (Review Updated: 2009-03-07)


Do you want to read a TOTALLY FANTASTIC STORY that actually has something to say other than "She sucked my big dick as I licked her wet juicy pussy"? I mean c'mon folks! You're here to fulfill a desire in your own life or to 'escape' your reality or whatever your needs are. HOWEVER, the reality of our living situation gets worse by the day.

I sit here writing this on Saturday, March 7, 2009. Why did I feel the need to include the date in this review? To remind ALL OF YOU of what this story can be for you. A SIMPLE GUIDELINE that could very well be the way of your own future in your own home town.

As the author wanrs us from his brief description of this story, "may be depressing". HOWEVER, the way these fictional characters have turned their lives around may be just the thing our socio-economic situation may need just to endure the useless waste of money that our respective (yes, not only good 'ol USA is being hurt or effected by the economic crisis but EVERYWHERE is feeling it as a result of US Financial Policy read any news online or watch it. FUCKIN' DEPRESSING)

So, why would I recommend all of you read this seemingly depressing story? Because, it is an awesome story and it deals with what IS happening today.

We are only about 45 days into Obama's presidency and the naysayers are WISHING him nothing but NEGATIVITY & FAILURE! What Lazlo has done was approach the problems in a way that "regular" people can totally understand and relate to.

He's not saying "Why doesn't President Obama do this and that for us?" He's stating pure unadulterated FACTS OF LIFE and has in story form, put it out there for us to "THINK about it FOLKS"

Don't just sit on your ass at your computer and read this and go "Oh how I wish something like that was available to us I could really use the help, my fucking cable bill is going to be cut off and I can't read SOL or get any of my other porn shit anymore unless...."

One of my favorite things about SOL is that this is truly a site where one of our most basic tenants of freedom is still preserved....FREE SPEECH!

If Dept. of Homeland Security (DHS) had it's way we wouldn't be able to read this anymore. We would have to really go "undercover" just to read what we want to.

Does the phrase "Big Brother" come to mind? Google Hitler's "The Big Lie" and you'll see what this story is talking about.

We're all victims of many "Big Lie's and many things that "Big Brother" wants to control.

This story shows us a way to "think outside the box" and take control of one's own life.

Sure it's FICTION here but each and every subject matter approached in this book has a basis in FACT and you better pay damn close attention to what's going on around you 'cause your paychecks won't be worth the paper they're written on soon.

Sorry if this review has bummed anyone out. But, I hope it shocked the living shit outta you :)

Read this story and keep in mind...THIS COULD HAPPEN TO YOU!!!

MUCH RESPECT AND THANKS TO ALL OF YOU WHO HAVE READ MY REVIEWS AND ALLOWED ME TO EXPRESS MYSELF.
LIKE YOU, I APPRECIATE AN AWESOME STORY
LAZLO IS ONE HELL OF A WRITER. SO I SUGGEST YOU READ ALL OF HIS STORIES. YOU WON'T BE DISAPPOINTED.
AND IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY, PLEASE SUPPORT THIS SITE. LAZEEZ DID NOT PUT ME UP TO THIS I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE HE LIVES OR IF HE IS REAL. I DO KNOW THAT I AM VERY APPRECIATIVE OF BEING A PART OF THIS AWESOME SITE AND HAVE BEEN A PAYING MEMBER SINCE 2005 IT'S BEEN WORTH IT BECAUSE I GOT TO CHOOSE AND NOBODY IS TAKING AWAY MY FREEDOM OF CHOICE! NOT WITHOUT A FUCKING FIGHT!

PEACE-
DA VETTE MAN

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10