Best Laid Plans by papatoad

Description: He put up with her cheating until she started embarassing him in public. Trying to get away with as much money as possible proved to be more difficult than he anticipated.
Size: 50 KB ( ~ 9,481 words)
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Cheating, Slow

Review by TheMoose63   [other reviews by TheMoose63]

Reviewed: 2008-09-09

Once again PapaToad had delivered where most authors only wish they go on a good day. My only complaint is that he doesn't let his readers give feedback and he confessed to me that he doesn't take criticism well. Hey PapaToad, wake up and look at your scores, they're great! Give your readers a chance to compliment your talents and screw those who don't have smarts to know how good of an author you are.

So, to the story. A husband overhears his wife telling the country club set that if it wasn't for XXX she wouldn't have a sex life and...anyway you get the point, she's complimenting someone who isn't her husband and he hears her. What is he to do? It's a complicated tale that brings in a waitress he meets in Reno, her ex and family and oh yea and a bevy of cops looking for him! God I only wish I could write have as good as he does! You'll enjoy the story although he does end it as he does most of his stories, with a happy ending! Highly recommended reading!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10