A teenage girl develops an aversion to sex. In order to satisfy her boyfriend she enlists the assistance of her precocious little sister. As a result, she and her sister become very close and the relationships that come about turn out to be good therapy.
Size: 167 KB (33,875 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Incest, Brother, Sister, Swinging, Gang Bang, Group Sex, Black Male, White Female, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Petting, Cream Pie, Spitting, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
There are a lot of sexy stories on SOL. This is one of them. Vulgus has a real talent for describing characters. Either he has a great imagination, or he knows a lot of sexy people.
I don't want to give a play by play of the action, it might burn my screen, and its not good for a review to spoil the story by giving it away. Certainly "much sex" applies, in spades. Oops, I wasn't supposed to mention the race of some of the characters.
Lets do the numbers. The plot is a high seven. Straight forward, drives ahead, no flashbacks or strange jumps. Sets up sex scene after sex scene and makes the characters (and reader) happy doing it. Its like a B plus but not unpredictable enough to be an A minus. Good, but most other authors won't lose sleep trying to figure out how to make their stories as good.
Technical is nine, I didn't see any errors. Why didn't I give it a ten? I try to be very sparing of tens, nobody is perfect, there might be an error I missed.
Appeal to Reviewer: its A level work, an eight, outstanding. I want to tell everybody to read it when they need a pickmeup to make them smile. Maybe I ought to give it a nine, but then I would have to explain why it isn't my ten for January.
I admit Vulgus is sometimes an aquired taste. His heroines sometimes suffer to make the story either more interesting or longer. This one does not have that aftertaste. One of the main characters is 14. Its definitely not pedo, but if you are exceptionally sensitive or live in a state like Saudi Arabia, you might want to think twice about storing it in your computer. Read it, enjoy it, and thank some higher power Vulgus is still writing great stories.
