Aeolus P. Cerigo by aloneagain

Author's Description:
This man, he is your lover?
Size: 93 KB ( ~ 17,636 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual

Review by Erik Thread   [other reviews by Erik Thread]

Reviewed: 2008-06-11

Aloneagain has written a wonderfully enjoyable story that piques the intellect as well as the libido.

Aeolus P. Cerigo is a wonderful roller coaster ride; a bicycle race with feinting and drafting, sprinting and a final dash; a love story told with passion and grit, tenderness and honesty.

Aloneagain wrote a beautiful story for us to chew and savor, with characters who spring to life from their bondage. It was almost as if Aloneagain clothed the characters with frozen features, and spent the rest of the story testing whether they could thaw.

Although not boasting a compelling plot, woven into the storyline is an intricate character study that contains elements of a compelling plot: multiple layers of conflict, foreshadowing, mystery, hope, gradually revealed purpose.

Aeolus P. Cerigo is thoughtfully written, with care given to editing and proofreading. Its sometimes long, convoluted sentences read clearly, a difficult writing challenge to accomplish.

A major part of the storyline is the sex--much of the character development is shown in the frequent and hot bedroom scenes. Nevertheless, Aeolus P. Cerigo is not merely a sexual romp. It is a carefully-planned story of two very different, very similar people.

I enjoyed and appreciated the story very much.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10