This is a good story. It could have been better if the technical flaws were fixed, but at least they didn't render it unreadable.
The story itself seems to be a strange blend of BDSM, romance, and stroke with a side of kinkiness. The central characters are interesting, if slightly stereotyped; the drawn out pacing and slow development worked better than the sudden character transitions, but still this was an enjoyable read.
Hopefully, future work from this author will be edited prior to posting. I know I would be interested to see the results of that.
As for this story, I'd suggest it's best that those who care about the quality of the writing to bypass it for now. I'd suggest those who can look past the flaws and are comfortable with the content should find this a promising story, though.