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Mathew 'Mats' Rogers Series by Jack Spratt

Author's Description:
Although Mats would just love to stay and enjoy his nieces and their many preteen friends; he has to return to work, not because he needs the money but because he enjoys his job. No, he does not lead the life of a monk in Texas. Enjoy the continuing travels of Mats. There is more to cum.
Size: 712 KB ( ~ 135,016 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2008-05-17

First off, I have to say that this was not terribly well written. There were numerous grammatical and typographical errors, and several basics of good writing style were violated. If a reader can overlook those problems, however, it is a good piece for what it is, although I do suggest readers pay more attention to the synopsis than the codes on this one, as the girls involved in the story are younger than the codes imply.

Anyone looking for complex plots or serious character development should probably look for something other than a stroke story such as this one. People who object vehemently to pedo stories will want to avoid it as well. For those looking for reasonable stroke material - even if it is not high quality writing - and are not squicked by the content of this one, I would suggest giving this one a try. Although personally, I would have rather waited for an edited version to be posted.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 5 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9