First off, I have to say that this was not terribly well written. There were numerous grammatical and typographical errors, and several basics of good writing style were violated. If a reader can overlook those problems, however, it is a good piece for what it is, although I do suggest readers pay more attention to the synopsis than the codes on this one, as the girls involved in the story are younger than the codes imply.
Anyone looking for complex plots or serious character development should probably look for something other than a stroke story such as this one. People who object vehemently to pedo stories will want to avoid it as well. For those looking for reasonable stroke material - even if it is not high quality writing - and are not squicked by the content of this one, I would suggest giving this one a try. Although personally, I would have rather waited for an edited version to be posted.