Two Wives, Two Lives by GToast

Description: Love found, lost, and found.
Size: 28 KB ( ~ 5,310 words)
Type: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Time Travel, DoOver, First

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2008-05-06

Personally, I didn't like this story very much. However, I thought that it was quite a good story, and fairly well written, especially considering it's an early attempt from a new author.
This story is a subtle variant on the normal time travel themes, which may be appreciated by some readers. Although I didn't enjoy it much, I'm certain others will.
I'd suggest those looking for stroke would be best suited to bypassing this story. I'm not certain who I'd recommend this story to, other than people interested in finding new writers with talent.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 5