Not A Very Good Cop by Daghda Jim

Description: Well, I'm not. I get in dark moods. I piss people off. I have anger management issues. I just got busted from detective to blues-wearing patrol officer. And now I'm listening to another abused wife and mother that the system can't protect from her asshole husband. That's putting me in an even darker mood. I gotta do something!
Size: 125 KB ( ~ 23,704 words)
Type: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Cheating

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2008-04-04

It's always surprising when a newer author turns out a story as well written as this one was. It contains far fewer technical flaws than most (formatting errors excluded), makes what would normally be a completely unlikeable and unbelievable main character both sympathetic and interesting, blends humor into the narrative seamlessly, and even shows some originality.

Probably the biggest complaint I have with the story - other than the amount and content of the back story introduced into the narrative - would be the author's repeated use of the story as a forum for social commentary. This is, however, hardly an issue exclusive to this particular author, and thus shows clearly that I thought it a particularly good story.

Overall, I'd consider this a good action-based romance, and I really would recommend it to pretty much anyone who is looking for a good story. I'd suggest those just looking for stroke look elsewhere, though.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8