You Think Making Love Is Easy? by Marsh Alien & tickledkitty

Description: A Cupid's Tale: The good news, Gwen, is that Julius, the cupid responsible for your part of the country, has finally found your true love. The bad news is that Julius is probably the worst archer in cupiddom. Fasten your seat belt; you may be in for a bumpy ride.
Size: 111 KB ( ~ 21,049 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Romantic, Magic, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2008-02-04

Don't let the scores mislead you, this was actually a fairly good story. Technically, it may have deserved a higher rating, but as I skimmed over large portions I can't justify giving it anything higher. As for the plot, I think it was a little original - even if it was similar in some respects to other Valentine's stories - and quite amusing. It really fell apart in the appeal (for myself, at least) in the later stroke sections. That's one of those personal quirks that others may or may not share.

Basically, if you're looking for a lighthearted romantic comedy of errors, this is a good story to try out, especially if you (unlike myself) like female first person narratives.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 6