Flight To Tomar Three by curious2c

Description: A space ship is on a routine cargo and exploration trip. Things change for all aboard in an instant. With this story I delve into an area of fiction I've not done before. Let me know how I did?
Size: 137 KB ( ~ 25,979 words)
Type: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Pregnancy

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2008-01-31

In "Flight To Tomar Three", we have the story of Jim, a 45 yr. old Mech Tech that is assigned to a deep exploration ship that is going out into unexplored space. The crew of 9 females and 3 males is reduced to 9 females and 1 male when an asteroid strikes the ship and severely damages the computer systems. At this time, sex is done with VR and robots, not actually physical contact with another person. With the VR system down, what will the crew do? Read along and find out!

The sex in this story was quite hot, though it only encompasses the first two women of the 9 that draw straws to see what order they go in. Those two sexual encounters were quite intense, and worthy as good stoke material. Trying to write about all 9 women would have diluted the effectiveness.

The plot itself is nicely conceived, and worked well for a stroke piece. While it could have been drawn out to show greater details of all 9 women and their lives with Jim, I think the overall story would have suffered for it. Keeping it tightly focused and just letting us fully explore the first two women made for a better story.

Technically, I saw no errors that jumped out at me.

Overall, this was a nice, if a bit longer than most people want, stroke piece. The sex was intense, and the author created a workable plot.

If you are looking for stroke and don’t mind waiting a bit for it to start, this is great stuff.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9