Deception by John Smith


Description: I was asked by many readers to add to this original, single chapter story. If you have read chapter 1 already, read it again as a few things were changed with the addition of the new chapters. There are 5 in all and the others will be posted as soon as they come back from editing.
Size: 57 KB ( ~ 10,809 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual

Review by TheMoose63   [other reviews by TheMoose63]

Reviewed: 2008-01-20


Deception is an interesting story, devoid of sex which makes it even better. It is a story about an unfaithful wife, a best friend, illicit sex and a plan. The reader should be able to figure out most of the plot and the ending but it was well written and is very enjoyable. A short story worth the time to read.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10