Star Crossed Lovers by HLD

Author's Description:
Set in the future, Eric and Maylene are two space navy sailors whose paths cross after combat injuries. Their shared experiences bring them together, but the Navy has other ideas.
Size: 227 KB ( ~ 43,046 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Military

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2008-01-14

I'll start out by saying I really did enjoy this story, for the most part. There were a number of technical deficiencies which detracted from that enjoyment, otherwise I would've rated it even higher.

For those looking for a good MilSF story with a romance weaved throughout, I can't think of a better place to start, even with those aforementioned flaws. If you're looking for a simple enjoyable read which is flawlessly edited, look elsewhere; but if a little confusion isn't too much distraction for you, give this piece a read.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8