A Rainy Day... In The Old Barn by Dag123


Description: A boy... out fishing! A girl out for a summer stroll! Two years after High School they meet again by chance. Caught unexpectedly in a heavy rain storm, they find shelder and comfort inside an old deserted barn. In out of the rain, they discover they have unknowingly shared the same secret dream-their love for each other. This sweet endearing story of a Sailor home on Leave and the girl that should have been his High School Sweetheart will touch your heart.
Size: 10 KB ( ~ 1,896 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, White Male, White Female

Review by BikeWriter   [other reviews by BikeWriter]

Reviewed: 2010-08-14


Aww! Can you say poignant, as defined as "Profoundly moving; touching"? A sailor home and on the last days of his leave encounters his Dream Girl from high school he'd never made advances to. What's this? She divulges he'd been in her dreams and in her heart all these years?
This is a must read for romantics like me. Please read it, it will only take a few minutes!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10