Brent and his wife Kaila are on a second honeymoon. They run into Helen and Charlotte, two lovely women who happen to be VERY into each other. Kaila discovers another side of herself... and Brent finds that patience is a virtue.
Size: 308 KB ( ~ 58,406 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, BiSexual, Group Sex, Pregnancy, Cream Pie
I almost didn't read this story, and I really would've missed something if that happened. While the technical deficiencies were numerous, the story itself was (mostly) worth putting up with those flaws.
A little slow to start, a lot unrealistic in places, and at times a significant source of tooth decay... but the characters are so damn interesting (and the sex is almost always there) that I'd almost rate this a 'must read'.
Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8