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Coming Home: Book 1 by Brendan Buckley

Author's Description:
A man returns to the town he left 20 years before to find that sometimes time doesn't heal all wounds. His old friends have new lives and the people he left behind aren't the same as he hoped to find. Can he enjoy a rebirth in the town where he was born?
Size: 273 KB ( ~ 51,769 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by Dark_Blade   [other reviews by Dark_Blade]

Reviewed: 2014-07-12

A very well written story, thought out and planned. I loved it from beginning to end and am sad there is no follow up to this. I hope that you write again, I greatly enjoy your work.

Forewarning this is not a sex story, it does not have sex in it, but it doesn't need to, it has plot, which makes it even more appealing.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2013-09-02 - (Review Updated: 2013-09-02)

It's too bad Brendan has quit submitting anything for a few years.

After reading Path to Glory, I read Coming Home:Book 1.

Yeah I knew it was incomplete and therefore I will not flame the author for leading me down a road and then cutting me off.

I would like to say that Coming Home is a complete work. Yes there is a bit of a lead in to another book but this one could stand alone.

The author did a pretty good job in character development and possible could have done less and gotten by.

The whole story is good. The story line is good and I do feel for the author who obviously has lost someone important to him before their time.

READ THE STORY. You'll like it.

The only glaring glitch is when he said one of the operatives, Lucky, was buried in his home town but then in the same paragraph mentions his burial in Arlington.

Nuf said.

Don't miss this one or Path to Glory.

And BRENDAN, Start writing and posting again. If you want a proof reader/editor send me a line.


Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9