Forget The Drink, Gimme The Bitch by Marsh Alien

Description: Armed with his precious Scotch, writer Andrew Cavanaugh believes himself immune to the simple pleasures of life. But are his defenses enough to keep out the beautiful woman who has drunk herself unconscious at Pablo's Irish Bar?
Size: 39 KB ( ~ 7,396 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic

Review by The Black Knight   [other reviews by The Black Knight]

Reviewed: 2007-11-12 - (Review Updated: 2007-11-12)

Seeing as how the story which is paired to this one - SweetWitch's "Forget The Bitch, Gimme A Drink" - has received a review, I think it's only fair that the clear winner of the 'SweetWitch-Marsh Alien Feud Settlement Short Story Writing Contest' also get a review.

Technically, the story was pretty good. A few errors slipped past the final edit, but there weren't any jarring errors to distract from the story. The originality which is Marsh Alien's trademark is well displayed in this delightful little story.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9