Forget The Bitch, Gimme A Drink by SweetWitch

Author's Description:
A story of lust, betrayal and whoopin' ass. This is an entry in the SweetWitch-Marsh Alien Feud Settlement Short Story Writing Contest. As a courtesy to me, if you cast a vote on this story, please also read Marsh Alien 's "Forget the Drink, Gimme the Bitch."
Size: 30 KB ( ~ 5,689 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Voyeurism

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2007-11-12

Not for the faint of heart. But a really good bar fight is a thing of beauty. This is not a cat fight, no claws, no ripped bodices with the attendant description of quivering flesh and bouncing boobs.

What it turns out to be is a really good get even story that doesn't involve convoluted plans, technical gadgets or lawyers.

There is a lot to be found in the quiet ones and a lot to uncover if pushed too far.

A fun quick read. Don't pass it up.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10