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I Should Have Known Better by Harddaysknight

Author's Description:
A man pays a debt with his wife's services. Who's the real winner in this unusual triangle, or is there a winner?
Size: 35 KB ( ~ 6,637 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Wimp Husband, Oral Sex

Review by Joesephus   [other reviews by Joesephus]

Reviewed: 2007-06-04

One never knows what to expect when you start an HDK story. The only certainty is that it will be well written. This story throws several clich├ęs and then knocks them out of the ballpark. What surprised me most was the way the protagonist learned as the story progressed. In the end I think he was actually ready to move beyond the emotional stasis his divorce seems to have created. Like all good stories this one let me wanting more. I wanted to know how the protagonist used what he'd been taught, and I wondered if the antagonist had learned anything at all.

All in all a very interesting look at a relationship that is frequently written about in erotic stories but giving us a fresh prespepctive.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10