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Meet Josh, just an average guy. Meet Angela, a beautiful independent woman. One day they meet and Angela has an overwhelming desire to be a slave for Josh. What would you do if one day a woman showed up and demanded to be your slave? It isn't as easy as you might think.
Size: 684 KB (133,705 words)
Genre: Mind Control
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Mind Control, Fiction, Science Fiction, Light Bond, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Water Sports

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

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I have to confess, first and foremost, that Mind Control isn't a genre that normally attracts me. I'm extremely happy that in this case, I put aside my usual reluctance.

The Accidental Master could well have been called The Reluctant Master, and that is what sets it apart from the rest of the genre. Rather than a monster revelling in his power over others, our chief protagonist is troubled by his gift, disturbed by his power, and the way it makes his 'slaves' dependant on him. The twist in the tail is just icing on the cake of an excellent story.

Technically, there is little to be concerned about. OK there are things I would have changed had I been editing the text, but there's nothing to spoil the enjoyment of the tale.

The Accidental Master is well worth reading, even if Mind Control isn't one of your favourite subjects. I shall certainly be adding it to my library, I suggest you do the same.

Enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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