A Child's Christmas by Mat Twassel


Description: After playing Santa Claus at the West Side Orphanage, Al brings home little Malcomb'"a miniature Scrooge if ever there was one'"to celebrate Christmas with his family: the toddler twins, Tommy and Keda, the twins' sexy mother, Pat, and Pat's adorable little sister Julie.
Size: 22 KB ( ~ 4,172 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2011-11-17


Mat Twassel! You are an absolute bastard! You made me cry!

Warning! Do not read this story if you have a compassionate or caring disposition.

Anyone that has read many of my reviews will have seen me mention finding nuggets of gold amongst the dross. This little story is pure 22 carat gold. Mat sucked me in, baited me with a little sex, then took a sledge hammer to the red brick I call a heart and crushed it into smithereens. There's only one real sex scene, and even that's extraordinary, with an unexpected twist. All in all a tour de force, worthy of the top of your reading list.

Read it! If this story fails to make you cry, then abandon all hope!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10