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Lawyer, Lawyer by Marsh Alien

Author's Description:
He's an award-winning novelist with a beautiful lawyer wife and two gorgeous children. So now that she's away on a business trip, why is he watching pornography in his den with his wife's best friend? His wife's naked best friend. Oh, did I mention this was a Living Dolls sequel?
Size: 223 KB ( ~ 42,287 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Magic, Humor, Cheating

Review by TheMoose63   [other reviews by TheMoose63]

Reviewed: 2006-12-08

Okay, here is the deal! This is an absolutely great start to a continuing novel and I can't wait for the second chapter. The writing is excellent, the characters well developed and the storyline is not only believable but it sucks you in. Nothing in the story is there just for window dressing - everything has a purpose even if you don't know what it is at the time. We haven't even met the beautiful wife yet but I can't wait. Please Mr. Alien, I beg of you, finish the next chapter.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10