Across That Line by Longhorn__07

Description: His wife craved sex with other men and women, even if it wrecked the marriage. He tried everything he knew of but finally there was only one thing to do.
Size: 277 KB ( ~ 52,527 words)
Type: Drama
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Swinging, Group Sex, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Sex Toys

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2007-07-09

In "Across That Line", we have the story of Brad and Ashley, a young couple getting ready to celebrate their one year anniversary of marriage. Brad is a pretty straight laced guy. Ashley is a former swinger that has promised to never entertain the lifestyle again. Behind Brad's back, Ashley has booked them at a hotel that is hosting a swinger's convention. Then, she forgets her husband whens he runs into "old friends" at the hotel. Can their marriage survive her desire for swinging? Read along and find out.

The sex in this story wasn't as erotic as it could be, but it definitely served the purpose it had to in the story. While there is stroke value here, it isn't going to grab you by the throat.

The plot itself is excellent. The things the couple goes through, and the lines they cross as they try to survive are wonderfully woven.

Technically, I noticed no flaws in the story.

I really liked this story. It may not be as great as some of Longhorn__07's other stories, but it certainly is a very strong story.

The author touches on the swinging lifestyle with a nice touch. He also handles the various problems the couple faces with a gentle hand.

If you like "near cheating" stories, this one should really make you happy.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10