Schlong by Old Fart


Description: Mark Hawthorne is over-endowed. This is his story.
Size: 75 KB ( ~ 14,222 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Teenagers, Masturbation, Size

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2007-07-20


This is a love story, sort of. This is a story about a young lad's awkening to the perils of puberty. This is a story of a young man with an extrordinarily large penis.

This is a story about a young girls awakening to her first sexual encounter with jealousy... No, dammit, it's all of the above! And told by a master of the genre. (I've been trying to use that word for months since I read it in the newspaper.)

Mark Hawthorne is the elongated owner of the schlong, and Betsy Lou Krupke is his first love. They are neighbours in a lower middle class neighbourhood, and it is a well written tale which I thoroughly enjoyed.
I feel that this is not a stroke story, so did not mark it as such.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10