Karma by Wine Maker

Description: A story in Nick Scipio's Summer Camp Universe
Regan Thomas's life is a shambles. Nothing has turned out the way she would have chosen. The karma of her past has wreaked its worst on her. If it can go wrong, it either has or is about to. Can she fight the past and find redemption? She gave up on love a long time ago. Can someone change her mind?
Size: 147 KB ( ~ 27,876 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Oral Sex

Review by Slowpoke   [other reviews by Slowpoke]

Reviewed: 2009-01-03

Prior to this story, I never liked the Regan character in Nick Scipio's Summer Camp stories. Sure, she was cute enough (http://www.nickscipio.com/summercamp/extras/scgirls/sc_regan.html), but she was a rich bitch who, along with her boyfriend Rod, we were supposed to hate. Thus I was a bit skeptical when I saw this story and it languished in my queue for over a year. Yet once I got past the first chapter I just couldn’t put it down.

My only complaint is also one of this story’s greatest strengths: it’s short. There’s a saying, “If I had more time, this ___ would be shorter.” Well, let me just say that a lot of thought went into this story. While the story has a fast pace, the plot flows well and it doesn’t feel rushed. At five chapters you could read it in an evening, but there are plenty of chapter/story breaks for those that like to take things slower.

The story itself is very well written and I found myself rooting Regan on as she struggled to turn her life around. It was nice to find a story with a well crafted plot. There isn’t any sex in the first 3.5 chapters, but the last chapter and a half are smoking hot!

Overall, a very enjoyable read that I’d recommend to others.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10