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The Master's Project (1) - Ralph And Tanya by Lubrican

Author's Description:
Bob had to do something for his Master's project, and interviewing married couples seemed to be the thing that would work. He asked some personal questions and sometimes things got very. personal. In Book one, Ralph and Tanya ask Bob for a very special favor.
Size: 67 KB ( ~ 12,705 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Pregnancy

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-10-27

In this first installment of "The Master's Project", we get the early synopsis of the story, and then we see student Bob met Ralph and Tanya. What happens next is beyond Bob's imagination, but he likes it.

The sex in the story was nicely done. It wasn't scorching hot, but it fit the story better than if it had been. There was a distinct purpose behind it, and thus it needed to be what it was, instead of being an all out event. So, I give it high marks, even if it isn't the hottest I have ever read.

The plot itself is typical BOB fun. In other words, both believable and outrageous at the same time, blended together perfectly. I liked Ralph and Tanya a lot, and Bob himself is always great. The fun little asides that Bob thinks round out the story with a little humor, making you feel that you really know "Bob" the character. That is another one of BOB's best talents.

Technically, the story was fairly strong, but there were a few typos in it. Nothing horrible, but they should have been caught.

Overall, this was a fun little story. I think BOB is at his best when he can spend the time to really make you get to know the characters. This time, he managed to make me feel like I really knew these characters in a much shorter time frame. He is obviously growing as a writer, and this was very good stuff.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9