Breakdown by Nick Scipio


Description: Henry Adair is a successful businessman with an unsuccessful life. That changes when he picks up his daughter at college.
Size: 106 KB ( ~ 20,101 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Incest, Father, Daughter, Oral Sex, Exhibitionism, School

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2009-08-05


Henry is a really nice guy, and he is married to Leanne,"until death do us part" and all that bullshit! He is cuckolded by her personal trainer, the pool boy, the gardener, well you get the message, and his kids turned out to have the same principles as their mother. Except the idol of his life Aly his youngest daughter at nineteen who is the apple of his eye. So when her car breaks down in Virginia, he rushes across the continent to transport her home. And that is when the shan hits fit and the Ryder truck tranny breaks down in Backwater Texas, and Aly's true character surfaces. And poor old Daddy finds out how tough his little sweetheart really is, and all her friends!

Before I do a review, I look for two things; firstly "The End" I refuse to review an incoplete story. And I must like the way a story is told and the lack of errors in both the words, and the action.

So here we have a man who is suffering from his wife's infidelities, her total disregard for her husband, and the slow breakdown of his moralistic upbringing.

And Nick is one of the class acts on S-o-L!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10