Rebirth by HedbangerSA

Author's Description:
Nelah is a woman from Greg's past, mysterious and alluring. Her beauty and enduring youth hide a dark secret that could change his life forever, or kill him.
Size: 45 KB ( ~ 8,533 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Drunk/Drugged, Heterosexual, Fiction, Vampires, Oral Sex

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-09-14

In "Rebirth", we have the story of a beautiful fashion model and vampire, and her old college professor/cab driver that meets her again. But the model has a problem she can't ignore, and her old professor could be a great source of food. Or could he be more?

The sex in this story was pretty good, but because it involved the drugging of the men, there was a definite Fdom aspect to the scenes. The men were active initially, but then the drugs took hold, and all they could to was passively let things happen. That diminished the heat of the sex scenes in my view.

The story itself is really well crafted for a fairly short one. You get to understand the model and her motives. And the twist on the normal vampire mythology was nice, giving the story a greater sense of urgency.

Technically, the story had no errors that jumped out at me. I've come to expect that from HedbangerSA.

I quite liked this story. The model's situation lent itself to a great short story piece. She had something she had to do by a certain time, and she runs into the one man that strikes that chord within her just as she's running out of time. Now she has to decide what to do with the guy and her future.

While I would love to read a continuation of this story to see how things turned out between the two, this is a great story in its own right.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10