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The Dead Zone by DG Hear

Author's Description:
Coming out of a coma, my life has changed. Not a lot of sex in this story.
Size: 56 KB ( ~ 10,619 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Tear Jerker

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2008-04-24

3 on the FD scale.

You could see where this was going from the first 5 paragraphs.
There is no reason NOT to like this unless of course you are into the ob/gyn type of descriptive bedroom antics a lot of folks call erotica.
Don't get me wrong, there is a time and place for that and I do enjoy them.

Jeff gets stuck in a coma for 4 years and yes he does survive. He says it numerous times, to him it's been over night, to others it's been 4 years and things change.

DG wraps it up nicely with a small twist in the end and there are NO loose strings to wonder about.

For a short read it's a cute no frills sappy love story. We all need those once in a while.


Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8