The Girls All Get Prettier by Jake Rivers

Author's Description:
What does a cowboy to do when it's getting close to closing time and all the good looking girls are gone?
Size: 83 KB ( ~ 15,739 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic

Review by Daniellekitten   [other reviews by Daniellekitten]

Reviewed: 2006-08-06

The last line of the story goes a long way to show exactly how good a story this is. It isn't about the sex, or much about romance though there is a healthy dose of that. It's about love, the deep down kind that doesn't need to be shown with a dozen roses but can be seen with just a touch or a glance.

A cowboy looking to get laid finds something much better before closing time. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone looking for something great to read. Fantastic job, DJ.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10