Thawing the Ice Queen by Grampy


Description: Forest has invested a semester in thawing Dawn, the notorious campus Ice Queen. Now he is within hours of taking her virginity, wining a $10,000 bet and becoming a legend. Unknown to him, the Ice Queen has one more defense and it's the strongest of all
Size: 13 KB ( ~ 2,465 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Petting, School

Review by woodwiz   [other reviews by woodwiz]

Reviewed: 2006-07-16


Every now and then an asshole gets what he deserves.

That's really all I need to say about this very short story. At first it looks like a love story, then you get this sick feeling in your gut, then you smile.

Not much of a stroker, in fact it may make some wither depending on your attitude. Technical quality is way up there and sure, it's short but it carries the plot message across like a bullet to the heart, thus the high plot rating.

And, yeah, I like seeing the assholes get their's now and then, thus the appeal to the reader score.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10