I Made a Choice by thecelt

Author's Description:
I wasn't my baby's father and I had to make a choice.
Size: 57 KB ( ~ 10,809 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Tear Jerker, Cheating

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: 2016-06-05

'thecelt' created an interesting quagmire for Jonathan Hendricks, a new parent to Penny Ann Hendricks. The tale has two completely different endings. Both show Jonathan dealing with the problem in different ways.

Page Williams, the mother is not as well developed in the story as Jonathan, but as a supporting character she deals with the situation well.

This story made me think an awful lot about life and marriage in general. The story rated at a 8.333 overall, it has some good points and one end which I didn't like. You need to read the story and make your own decisions on how it affects you.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9