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Cattleman's Lament by Lubrican

Author's Description:
Sarah, daughter of cattle rancher Jonas Collins, goes missing under strange and disturbing circumstances. Then his wife disappears too. It all seems to have something to do with the unwelcome sheep rancher next door but Jonas doesn't seem to be able to solve the mystery. Can a 15 year old boy succeed where a grown man fails?
Size: 428 KB ( ~ 81,161 words)
Genre: Western
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Heterosexual, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Pregnancy, Slow

Review by Riceeyes   [other reviews by Riceeyes]

Reviewed: 2006-05-24


Another amazing story from one of my favorite authors.

A cattleman's daughter who is out for a ride gets kidnapped by some workers from a sheep ranch. The mother and the sheep rancher's son set off to rescue her. The daughter gets rescued by some Indians and they have to then rescue her from the Indians. During all of this the cattleman's sons meet the sheepman's daughters.

This is set in the late 1800's. The cattlemen hate the sheepmen. Due to the high character of the son especially and the other children, the cattle people have their prejudices changed. And the cattlemen's children have opportunities to exhibit their character and that influences the sheep people. A great tale of how they put their differences behind them and their relationships grow.

Lots of plot so not too much sex. If you have read and enjoyed BOB's other stories you will enjoy this one also.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10