The Bought Husband by Just Plain Bob

Description: A wealthy women hires an employee to be her husband for five years
Size: 82 KB ( ~ 15,550 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, NonConsensual, Drunk/Drugged, Heterosexual, Gang Bang, Interracial, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Slow

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-03-01

In "The Bought Husband", we read about Jack, a man who is paid by his female boss to be her husband for a term of 5 years. During that time, he has to put up with her obnoxious lover. Read along as things unfold.

The sex in this story was OK. If creampies don't turn you on a ton, there isn't a lot of stroke material to work with. If they do, especially when the cum from a black man is in a white woman, then you may find your motor really getting revved. I found it all to be non-erotic, but creampies aren't a fetish of mine. They also aren't a "squick", so if it is done well, I can enjoy it.

The plot was pretty thin. The whole scenario was different, but it was didn't feel like there was much meat on the bones. Character emotions just changed, without showing the evolution of those changes. That weakened the overall story, and made the characters less realistic.

Technically, there were some errors, but nothing that would throw you out of your immersion, especially if you enjoy the sex I mentioned above.

One note of warning: This story happens to contain a few occurrences of a very offensive word for blacks that rhymes with Tigger. Since every time that word was used, it was from the mouth/thought of a white character, it had a more abrasive effect. I personally find that word extremely offensive, and was thrown out of my attempted immersion by it. It was never said directly to a black character, but the inherent bigotry of that word bothers me. I believe I haven't let that influence my overall scoring, but I can't be certain I succeeded.

I want to be very clear: I am in no way suggesting that the author is a bigot.

Overall, I would have to say that this story has decent stroke appeal to those that find creampies and especially interracial creampie action to be a turn-on. Since that isn't a big thing for me, I found the story to be of only average interest.

Plot: 6 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 6