A story about a pair of fraternal twins who live out in the sticks and become very close growing up. A new kid moves in near them and Kathy suddenly has a new friend to play with and Mike gets jealous when he finds out how they play together. Mike will do anything for Kathy, anything at all, but telling the new girl their secret? That takes some thinking about: And the new girl has a terrible secret of her own.
Size: 433 KB (87,528 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, ft/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Romantic, Rape, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Extra Sensory Perception, Incest, Brother, Sister, Group Sex, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Water Sports, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Slow
Review by rgmanneck [other reviews by rgmanneck]
Reviewed:
This story is a classic and it’s unfortunate that it will be archived. It is a category unto itself, and I will measure similar stories to the standards that Paige Turner set in “The Word on Johanna.”
The story has all the attributes to attract the attention of the reader. The plot is not just intriguing but written with authenticity. The main characters, fraternal twins are on a mission to help a teenage friend overcome fears she has suffered.
Set in a time and place which many readers can relate to and may find nostalgic, reliving their own youth, and yet the story transcends generations.
Paige Turner develops and presents her female characters as real, believable individuals, but she does a most admirable job in capturing and shedding light on the teenage male psychology and physicality.
The author employs a grammatical style of long, flowing sentences when describing moments of sex that is intense, energetic, and incremental, and will take away your breath without skipping a beat. We were always taught to use short, choppy sentences, but the author shows that paragraph size sentences lend themselves best to such scenes.
I highly recommend that you read this story for its literary and entertaining quality before it is gone.
Furthermore, it would be fantastic if this story could be kept active.
