Anne and Mary by Robin Pentecost

Author's Description:
Two young women go to college in search of excellence in life and sex. They form a study group with four men. It's a long, slow story about how people learn to live together and share their special genius. They have problems, but they solve them.
Fair Warning!: There's lots of sex, but it's mostly off stage, so you need to use your imagination.
Size: 529 KB ( ~ 100,314 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Humor, Group Sex, Slow, School

Review by barron of ideas   [other reviews by barron of ideas]

Reviewed: 2015-12-25

Wow, have I got a story to recommend to you! It's got lots of sex, some of it polyamatory, in a college setting with interesting characters and some business activity and horseback riding. And there is a sequel I haven't even read yet. One of this author's stories turned up as a blast from the past so I decided to browse and see what else was on his story list.

It's barely Christmas as I type this, but it's a worthy present to almost anyone who likes stories on SOL. Do yourself a favor and see if you don't like it nearly as much as I do.

Doing the numbers, the plot is a solid 8, an A. There are lots of interesting twists and turns. Technical is a high enough 8 I am going to call it a 9. There is one homonym, hoard for horde. Otherwise flawless, as far as I remember. Appeal is a 9. That's an A plus. I don't give it a ten because I only give one a month.

I don't know why this isn't on a top 50 list. Its score is a little over 8, but it certainly is on my personal top 50. Try it, you'll like it, a lot.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9