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Whatever You Want! by Sandy

Author's Description:
When Sonia turns to her Professor for help, she gets what she needs, at a price... This story has something for most readers I believe, I hope you enjoy it.
Size: 50 KB ( ~ 9,481 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Spanking, Light Bond, Oral Sex, School

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-01-06

In "Whatever You Want", Professor Watson is visited by Sonia, a young female student that has gotten far behind in the college class he teaches, and is looking for help. The help she gets isn't what she expected. The story is primarily told from Professor Watson's perspective, but we get some thoughts from Sonia, as well.

While the teacher/student angle has been done frequently, Sandy pulls this one together nicely. Both Sonia and the Professor are believable characters. The professor's handling of Sonia, getting her to consent to the various actions, was an excellent portrayal of a Dominant handling a new submissive. While he took chances with entering into a sexual relationship with a student, he made sure she was a willing participant. All along the way, she consented to each act, and he stopped when her consent was temporarily withdrawn. One of the better displays of light D/s I have read recently.

Sexually, the story does well. The reader is allowed to see the professor's appreciation of Sonia's beauty. And the build-up to final consummation is handled well. This isn't outright stroke material, but it has a strong appeal. I didn't find it intensely erotic, but more subtly erotic. The handling of the D/s aspect is well done.

Technically, there are no glaring errors that jumped out at me as I read it. This was especially important to the story, since it is told with primarily the professor's voice. Poor spelling/grammar would have destroyed the strong air of realism the story projected.

While it does fine as a short story, I would like to see the author either continue it, or write more about this couple and their future exploits. I was just starting to get comfortable with them as it ended, and now I want to read more about them.

This story is well worth the time spent reading it.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10